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Lonna Bowstripe
August 15th, 2004, 01:53 PM
Self Explanitory...

Akkess of Empyrean
August 16th, 2004, 01:27 PM
Quit well done, I must say. I liked the ending.

Lonna Bowstripe
August 16th, 2004, 02:04 PM
Thanks, but could you put your comments in the "comments" section? Don't worry, I did that a lot myself.

Cheesethief
August 24th, 2004, 02:12 PM
hey. im back, welcuuum to akkess! ive been away, ;)
anyways, that was a pretty good poem. maybe ill do a second on impulse soon. or not. well, i thought it was really good, though, contrary to akkess, the end broke down a bit for me, in the rhyming sense. good though!