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Akkess of Empyrean
August 21st, 2004, 12:54 AM
I need opinions on who the "creature" should be, a wise squirrel, or a dim- witted vermin type beast. I'm leaning towards the vermin, but then I can't decide if it will be a ferret, stoat, weasel, or a rat. Please help!
Like it so far?

Lonna Bowstripe
August 21st, 2004, 12:18 PM
I really like the adjetives in the beginning (and throughout the rest too!) I'd rather have a wise squirrel. Keep up the good work!!

Akkess of Empyrean
August 21st, 2004, 02:15 PM
Okay that's 1 vote for wise squirrel.

August 23rd, 2004, 03:27 PM
I vote for the wise squirrel too!

Akkess of Empyrean
August 23rd, 2004, 07:02 PM
Of course you chose the squirrel Felldoh! ;)

Okay, that's good enough for me: A wise squirrel it is!

August 24th, 2004, 09:44 AM
What would make you say that? :D

Anyway, to comment on the story itself. I like it so far. I can't say I'm a fan of birds, but it won't stop me from reading it. Frankly I think you should keep Duskwing talking normal... but thats just me.

Akkess of Empyrean
August 24th, 2004, 05:30 PM
Oh nothing, just a flukey guess.... ;)

*Sigh*, no one seems to like birds very much. Ah well. Anyway, I'm going to keep Duskwing talking normal, it's seems more...."normal" that way, if you know what I mean :rolleyes:.

Hopefully, this story will perhaps change perspectives on birds :D

Lonna Bowstripe
August 25th, 2004, 03:57 PM
Oh. :lol: