View Full Version : Re: The first Poem!!! (And it's about Dibbuns, foodfights, etc.!)

Matthias of Redwall
February 23rd, 2003, 06:41 PM
I find this poem very interesting so here it go:

"We are the Long Patrol, these are our perilous blades, Pledged to your protection across all the seasons,Our lives are yours, your life is ours.


February 25th, 2003, 05:09 PM
great poem, hehhehe dibbuns! I don't really have the talent of poetry so i don't think i could write something like that heh heh

Slagar the Cruel
February 25th, 2003, 07:59 PM
Great poem. You should really post comments like these in the "Comments" (http://forums.longpatrolclub.com/forumdisplay.php?s=&forumid=10) section, though. :\

March 2nd, 2003, 03:39 PM
Thank you so much for posting something. I thought nobody had read the poem, and I worked rather hard on it.

March 14th, 2003, 11:50 PM
Wow! I love the poem. It's the kind you'd sing while marching off to battle. :cool: