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    Legacy of Ceteruler

    I would give you constructive criticism, if I could criticize such a phenomenal story as this. Keep it up!


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    You're too kind. I'm thinking of asking my sister to make a picture of Fenglaz so it can be my avatar. I have the gift of writing; she has the gift of drawing. My drawing would make Satan vomit in disgust.
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    I was thinking of making it so that the hares find a halberd's top and decide to use it for a weapon, and that's why Cregga Rose Eyes would know of the halberd, and so she uses it in The Long Patrol. Intereesting?
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    Typos will be my undoing.
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    Soon as I read the first post of your story I wanted to draw Fenglaz. Can I do you one of him? (no promising that it'll be soon)

    I can draw, honest guv!

    Plus, does anyone know why I can't do HTML or attachments?
    I don't know if that goes for everyone, but I've seen other peeps with html in their siggies and stuff. Just wondering...
    'I am all-powerful! I smite ye vermin down, singlepawedly thus, yea mightily with my blade!'

    The reproduction of plotbunnies is the greatest example of perpetuality in existence.

    And I think I can now say I'm officially a thread-killer. But I really *do* want to know where Redwaller's leather comes from!

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    Yes, you may draw him. Be sure to make the halberd nice looking, or my vermin shall deal with you appropriately. I hope to recieve it happily. Now, what turn shall the plot take next?
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    If you want to know, the word Rhynchok is based off the scientific name for the family of reptiles the tuatara belongs to, and that's basically what Zadder is. I'm thinking of not killing Zadder off, but he gets chased to the western sea and swims into the distance. The end could be when he washes up on the shores of a distant green land, and begins to think tyrannical ideas... Muahahaha... CLIFF-HANGER!
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    Fenglaz, I skimmed your story. And when you say you have the gift of writing, you are correct. You're not like most fan fiction writers-- you seem to take pride in your work. An excelant story too-- I'm really starting to enjoy reading some of these.
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    I forgot to comment on the writing. Very similar to Jaques's style, very well written. I was going to say something on longer scenes but rereading it's all just perfect.

    Good poems, like the mole one.

    He roasted an' noice!
    'I am all-powerful! I smite ye vermin down, singlepawedly thus, yea mightily with my blade!'

    The reproduction of plotbunnies is the greatest example of perpetuality in existence.

    And I think I can now say I'm officially a thread-killer. But I really *do* want to know where Redwaller's leather comes from!

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    I started it when I was just finished with Loamhedge, so I expect it to be. I've always found that vermin from beyond the sea are ridiculously cool (i.e., Gabool the Wild, Raga Bol, Lask Frildur, etc.), at least in my opinion. And I can't resist breaking the no foreign creatures rule. I mean, how else are you going to get a tuatara?

    ROASTED AN' NOICE! You're too nice, when I look at my poems and compare them to Jacques himself, I just feel like I've created an abomintation...
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    Quick, I need a name for a mouse! Any ideas?
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    Ruskfur?

    Hehhh, I felt like having a character with rusk in the name (dunno why) but you may have him/her if you like it.

    Has it been used already btw? It's so hard to get new names, there's that many books!
    'I am all-powerful! I smite ye vermin down, singlepawedly thus, yea mightily with my blade!'

    The reproduction of plotbunnies is the greatest example of perpetuality in existence.

    And I think I can now say I'm officially a thread-killer. But I really *do* want to know where Redwaller's leather comes from!

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    There might be one in Rakkety Tam or High Rhulain, but as neither of those are in the Redwall Encyclopedia, I can't check. I'll use it anyway.
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    I think you're safe, it didn't turn up at all in google.
    'I am all-powerful! I smite ye vermin down, singlepawedly thus, yea mightily with my blade!'

    The reproduction of plotbunnies is the greatest example of perpetuality in existence.

    And I think I can now say I'm officially a thread-killer. But I really *do* want to know where Redwaller's leather comes from!

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    How's the picture going?
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