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    Vermin Mishaps!

    Finally, it's here, Vermin Mishaps! My Redwall-based comic. Here is the Prologue.

    http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/c...h/Prologue.jpg

    In the next comic is where the story really starts. If you have any advice I'm open to it, but no harsh criticism.
    Vermin Mishaps! may return, eventually...maybe.

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    Very good job with the facial expressions. Simple, but works really well for the mood. =)

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    That's pretty good. Like Blade said, very effective and amusing use of expressions. My one critique is that you might want to use a straightedge for the borders, and possibly darken your lines a bit.
    "Luck, good or bad, is not the hand of God. Luck is the way the wind swirls and dust settles eons after God has passed by." - Winston Niles Rumsfoord, The Sirens of Titan

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    Cute. Write more.
    Quote Originally Posted by Ferahgo the Assassin View Post
    Ice cream makes everything better. Even Big Brother.

    Quote Originally Posted by Stephen King
    Both Rowling and Meyer, they’re speaking directly to young people. The real difference is that Jo Rowling is a terrific writer and Stephenie Meyer can’t write worth a darn. She’s not very good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ferahgo the Assassin View Post
    That's pretty good. Like Blade said, very effective and amusing use of expressions. My one critique is that you might want to use a straightedge for the borders, and possibly darken your lines a bit.
    Thanks, I will, but like I said earlier I was having pencil problems when I made this.
    Vermin Mishaps! may return, eventually...maybe.

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    Cool! I'm looking forward to more!
    ....and stuff.

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    A Redwall Comic? Loverly, never seen the likes of one before. Draw more pl0x

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    Quote Originally Posted by Brocktree1 View Post
    A Redwall Comic? Loverly, never seen the likes of one before. Draw more pl0x
    I was just recently on my Grandpa's farm where I climbed through hay, fell in a waist deep hole of water, got shocked by an electric fence(this was really my fault), ran through cow pies, and went under a house. Not that all this wasn't fun, but I am now recovering from a cold and was to tired to work on the comic I haven't gotten around to.

    I am hoping to always have a new comic up on Mondays, so that's when you can expect the next comic.(hopefully)
    Vermin Mishaps! may return, eventually...maybe.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gorath the Flame View Post
    I was just recently on my Grandpa's farm where I climbed through hay, fell in a waist deep hole of water, got shocked by an electric fence(this was really my fault), ran through cow pies, and went under a house. Not that all this wasn't fun, but I am now recovering from a cold and was to tired to work on the comic I haven't gotten around to.

    I am hoping to always have a new comic up on Mondays, so that's when you can expect the next comic.(hopefully)
    Sweet! Did you DIE?

    Is it monday yet?
    Quote Originally Posted by Ferahgo the Assassin View Post
    Ice cream makes everything better. Even Big Brother.

    Quote Originally Posted by Stephen King
    Both Rowling and Meyer, they’re speaking directly to young people. The real difference is that Jo Rowling is a terrific writer and Stephenie Meyer can’t write worth a darn. She’s not very good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fuzface View Post
    Sweet! Did you DIE?

    Is it monday yet?
    Yes. *Rolls Eyes*

    No, but I can assure you that there will be a comic up on Monday......unless I forget to post it.
    Vermin Mishaps! may return, eventually...maybe.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gorath the Flame View Post
    Yes. *Rolls Eyes*

    No, but I can assure you that there will be a comic up on Monday......unless I forget to post it.
    *puts BBBB on your grave, but wind sweeps it into the drainige thingie on the street* Poor Gory...


    Is it Monday yet?
    Quote Originally Posted by Ferahgo the Assassin View Post
    Ice cream makes everything better. Even Big Brother.

    Quote Originally Posted by Stephen King
    Both Rowling and Meyer, they’re speaking directly to young people. The real difference is that Jo Rowling is a terrific writer and Stephenie Meyer can’t write worth a darn. She’s not very good.

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    Wow. For once in my life, I'm actually looking forward to Monday!
    ....and stuff.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flinky_rules View Post
    Wow. For once in my life, I'm actually looking forward to Monday!
    Glad to bring meaning into your Mondays.
    Vermin Mishaps! may return, eventually...maybe.

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    Tommorow is Monday! Yay! *does the happy dance, whatever that is*
    I hope my school has a snow day tommorow, that would be great!
    ....and stuff.

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    Here it is, COMIC #1!!!

    http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/c...Starvation.jpg

    So what do you think?
    Vermin Mishaps! may return, eventually...maybe.

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