I like it.
I don't like it.
It's depressing.
It's too sappy.
Since there seemed to be a surgance of poetry, I decided to try to write one.
Mother's Day
Wounded and bleeding, the soldier lay dying.
And from his lips, a moan came crying:
"I forgot to make a card," he said sighing,
As on the field, he lay bleeding and dying.
Yeah, I don't know what motivated me to write this. I think I'm going soft. Anyway, what do you think?
Originally Posted by Ferahgo the Assassin
Good job... Kinda cool and sad at the same time.. as you said in "My Other Poem!"
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Tee hee! I love how the only thing he thinks about when he's about to die is that he forgot to make a card for his mom. She might not even notice, or at least she probably wouldn't care much. I think it's more funny than depressing. I like it.
"[Major Cuthbert] had a daughter named Petunia, a real beauty, quiet an' gentle. She was the flower of the Long Patrol. Many a young ranker lost his heart to her, I can tell ye."
- Captain Raphael Granden from High Rhulain
Yeah, it is kinda funny in a twisted, sadistic sort of way...
I agree, except for the "Tee hee!" part.
Vermin Mishaps! may return, eventually...maybe.
How did he get wounded? In war? Or in War with his mother
I liked it.
"plucky!" "Hello Dashie, I've missed you." "Yeah I've missed you too."
Animals of farthing wood the tv series.
He shot or something. I don't know. All my brain conjured up was a bleeding soldier stretched out on the ground, his rifle limp beside him.....mumbling about how he forgot to make a card.How did he get wounded? In war? Or in War with his mother
I liked it.
I didn't mean for me post to sound like critisim I mean't for it to sound funny.
"plucky!" "Hello Dashie, I've missed you." "Yeah I've missed you too."
Animals of farthing wood the tv series.
Don't be so worried about offending me. I don't get offended easily, and I'm not going to be offended by your opinions.
Oh good *lets out a sigh of relief* I have that problem at home. Or should I say at summer Arts camp at Milligan Collage.
"plucky!" "Hello Dashie, I've missed you." "Yeah I've missed you too."
Animals of farthing wood the tv series.
I like it but it is depressing.It also makes you feel gulity.
Awesome... Just the right level of morbidity. I think it's really good.
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