My Story Idea (Good or Bad)

[Lord Thunderpaw]

I am going to start writing a Redwall-based fan fic. My idea: make up another abbey or something and make its inhabitants native to my continent, North America. Keep in mind that even though some animals live in Europe and North America I probably won't use them in my abbey or whatever(example: mice live in North America and Europe but I won't use them in my abbey or whatever).I (probably; I might have to do more research on where they live) will use raccoons, porcupines, possums, chipmunks, and others.

[Fuzface]

I am going to start writing a Redwall-based fan fic. My idea: make up another abbey or something and make its inhabitants native to my continent, North America. Keep in mind that even though some animals live in Europe and North America I probably won't use them in my abbey or whatever(example: mice live in North America and Europe but I won't use them in my abbey or whatever).I (probably; I might have to do more research on where they live) will use raccoons, porcupines, possums, chipmunks, and others.

Sounds like it could be interesting, LT. Would this take place in Mossflower, or somewhere in an Americanish place?

[Mad Maudie McBurl]

I need to know more about it before I vote.
but it does sound interesting. umm one request could you add wolves and umm make them good please. just a small request.

[Lord Thunderpaw]

Sounds like it could be interesting, LT. Would this take place in Mossflower, or somewhere in an Americanish place?

It will probably take place somewhere in Mossflower.

Also, I probably will use prairie dogs, cougars (a. k. a. mountain lions, cougars, and panthers), bears,coyotes, lemmings and muskrats (though I am currently using them both in a Redwall fan fic where they come to the actual abbey).

However, the animals in my story might meet the actual series' animals.

[Lord Thunderpaw]

Sounds like it could be interesting, LT.

I just realized I have a better nickname than "Thunderboy"!

umm one request could you add wolves and umm make them good please. just a small request.

Probably not, Urgan was a wolf in the Redwall series.

[Bagira_GoldenPlume]

I have a story idea quite similar to your's; Only my goodbeasts go like this:
· Badgers
· Bats
· Beavers
· Chipmunks
· Hare/Rabbits
· Mice
· Moles
· Otters
· Squrriels and
· Shrews

Both Europe and North American,and it is setted in a kingdom (not abbey) complete with a castle; and they ride Deer like horses.

[Mad Maudie McBurl]

Probably not, Urgan was a wolf in the Redwall series.[/QUOTE]

Um Not to be Rude but let me point out the Urgan was not a wolf. He was a Fox that had Slayed a wolf and he wore the skins, it was never said in the book that wolves were good or bad, so could you please make them good.

[Lord Thunderpaw]

Um Not to be Rude but let me point out the Urgan was not a wolf. He was a Fox that had Slayed a wolf and he wore the skins

Actually you are wrong. The Foxwolf Urgan Nagru supposedly slew the wolf Urgan but really he just froze to death. If you think I am stupid and don't know as much as you about the Redwall series you are wrong. I know Redwall...a lot.

By the way, the past tense of slay is slew, not slayed.

[Mad Maudie McBurl]

I didn't mean it that way. Sorry I didn't mean to offend you.

[Abbot Peter]

Actually you are wrong. The Foxwolf Urgan Nagru supposedly slew the wolf Urgan but really he just froze to death. If you think I am stupid and don't know as much as you about the Redwall series you are wrong. I know Redwall...a lot.

Woah, woah, woah. She didn't mean it that way. She just got Urgan and Urgan Nagru confused because Urgan wasn't a main character. He just had a couple paragraphs about how Urgan Nagru said he "Slew that wolf".

[Lord Thunderpaw]

I didn't mean it that way. Sorry I didn't mean to offend you.

OK, I am sorry. Friends?

[Mad Maudie McBurl]

OK, I am sorry. Friends?

Yeah friends

[Lord Thunderpaw]

Yeah friends

OK, great!

[Safronia_Cedarwood]

You do know this is one of those topics where people don't have enough heart or rudeness to criticize you, right? (That's a good thing.)

I guess it's okay. It's not really Redwall based, though, because if you're making an entirely different Abbey in an entirely different place with entirely different species, there's not much resemblance, is there? Unless you include the same customs, hierarchy and traditions Redwallers, Guosim and vermin have.

[Ferahgo the Assassin]

I voted that it's a good idea, but I don't think it would be realistic to have the abbey set in Mossflower if it has American animals. It would be interesting, however, to write about a parallel of Redwall Abbey somewhere in North America, but then you'd have to be satisfied with them not interacting with the known Redwall universe - unless you want to have some Mossflower explorers show up via ship.